Draft Documentary - Internet Culture - Online Hysteria

We have improved the documentary since the last edition by improving the sound and lighting in interview one.

The interviews have also been cut to meet the time limit.

Also transitions have been decreased in duration to make the documentary fast paced.

Documentarian Script

Below os the script for the documentarian for the two scenes that link the interviews together:

Script 1

Kira is one user out of hundreds of thousands that go on Tumblr on a daily basis. Many Tumblr users have positive experiences on the site, however,  there have been cases of bizarre behaviour.

Script 2

There have bee  many criticisms and opinions surrounding Tumblr.  Some may argue that Tumblr creates an unrealistic and unnatural world, where as others believe that the site allows individuality to flourish. I am about to visit media consultant,  Trevor Preston, to get his opinion on the online hysteria that appears on the site.

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